Since it is National Poetry Month, I thought I would share my favorite lyric from the musical Liberation. We previously told you the story of Liberation – A Musical That Almost Was and the book’s co-author, Betty. I mentioned that Betty’s favorite song was called “I Believe” and I posted that lyric over on Sunday Night Blog.
Rich and Betty at Pajama Game rehearsal
My favorite song was the only one not expressly written for the show. It was written in the time period of the original script and only 20 years later did we decide that a secondary character needed a song. He represented the only love interest in the show, but we were concerned about writing a new song in the style of the original show. One day I played a recording for Betty without comment hoping she would say what I wanted to hear, “Ray’s song!” And so it is.
Perhaps I love it so much because the music seemed to match up perfectly with the words. That is good since I rarely would comment to Michael what type of music he should write for any set of lyrics. The Soundcloud recording below is the one made by Michael after we agreed to put this song in the show. It includes the one word changed from the original recording, although I am still not convinced we needed to change. Can you guess the word below that was put it in only for the show, and what it might have replaced? Hint: It’s an end of line word.
You
What are the words to convey the meaning?
How can I express this feeling in me?
How to say thanks, for all that you’ve done —
You’ve opened my world infinitely.
You are the light that shine on my journey.
You are the smile that inspires my day.
You are the power that makes me keep moving.
You are the wisdom that shows me the way.
For me to share in the dreams of your world,
For you to share in the building of mine –
This is a gift for which I am grateful.
This I’ll remember throughout my lifetime.
You are the laughter that sings in my heaven.
You are the tears that come now and then.
You are the reason for me to keep trying.
Thank you so much,
Thank you so much,
Thank you so much
For being my friend.
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Very poetic Rich, I listened to your soundcloud version. The piano was prominent but I had a hard time hearing the voice. I put my head phones on and it helped a bit.
Leslie
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Thanks. Yes, it was not a good recording. It was likely made in the late 1970’s with an in expensive recorder on cassette tape. I turned it into an MP3 and dumped it onto Soundcloud.
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If the piano and the voice were on separate tracks you could have boosted the vocal. It would have been nice to hear the lyrics better.
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No, the original was cheap cassette. There was no track separation for me to play with.
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It would’ve been so nice to hear the lyrics.
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Perhaps someday I can get an up to date recording. Michael is reluctant to revisit the past songs and I do not have the sheet music.
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The right time will come Rich.
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